Saturday, June 28, 2008

She Comments

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She lingers in my mind,
Like a ghost in the wall.
She won't leave not at this time.
I cannot lose, I shall not fall.
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Michael Koelliker
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J Baker 05 July 2008

Vry well written. Well done

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Imogen Lee Greene 28 June 2008

Nice. Perfect description, like a song you want to listen to over and over again.

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Michael Koelliker

Michael Koelliker

Victorville, California
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