Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Shaun J. Leach- My Everything, My Life, My Rock Comments

Rating: 3.7

Sitting alone, again on the couch
With this pen and paper in hand.
Tons of memories, my mind keeps racing
Because lately, there are some things I dont understand.
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Crystal Castro
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Shaun Leach 31 July 2016

Emotional but all lies

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Shaun Leach 31 July 2016

Such a emotional poem but yet it was all lies

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Khairul Ahsan 04 September 2013

Sigh! A very passionate poem telling the story of ups and downs. At the end of the day, not too sure if the marriage sustained the trials. But one thing you're forgetting I ALWAYS find things out, I can read into the lies. I fully agree, all wives do, all wives can! The poem is too long, but the curiosity to see through it kept me reading on and on! But things have changed between us drastically Like a flickering candle ready to lose its flame Beautiful! Nice poetic discourse.

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Hassaan Noori 06 January 2013

wow! nice poetic story! love it

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Crystal Castro

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