Saturday, December 9, 2006

Shatters Comments

Rating: 3.5

Fragile soul
You broke it
Without trying to
You shattered my core
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Rebecca Pring
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Greenwolfe 1962 12 May 2008

This is the common story of heartbreak for a woman particularly so. This is because of their beauty. A man will seldom tell a beautiful woman that it is over. The truth is, for him, it never began in the first place. Men are always falling in love with the fantasy. Its the fantasy they love, not her. Well done. GW62

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Prasanna Kumari 08 February 2007

sometimes life is like that...we fail to glue together the shattered pieces...that is powerfully brought out in your poem...

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