Shattering Presence Comments

This is a fiercely and poetically expressed personal moment (of rage perhaps?) , when all control is taken away and the 'shadowing past' is allowed free rein. The lines: '...the eyes turn cold. And the running from the shadowing past, Gains a quicker pace from this distorted world.' are particularly powerful and take the reader deep below the surface of this dramatic piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

a deep toughts...reflections of the past revibrates... nice concepts...good write Ency Bearis

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