Shattering Mirrors Comments
looking in the mirror its no longer me
just a broken lifeless shell is all i see
wearing the makeup and the right clothes
the fake smile, it all puts on a show
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I wrote you two comments about this poem but I can't tell if they were posted. Great write. My heart goes out to you. [3
Love is patient, love is kind, and is not jealous; love does not brag and is not arrogant, does not seek its own, is not provoked, does not take into account a wrong suffered, does not rejoice in unrighteousness but rejoices with the truth; bears all things, believes all things endures all things Love never fails; 1 Corinthians 13: 4-8 If the person you are with doesn't have these qualities of love then that person does not know how to love. It's not you that can't be loved, it's that the person you are with that is incapable of loving. Don't ever try to change yourself for some one else. Your poem is deeply felt, touches my heart. Great write.
Beautifully written! can see all the pain and unclear of who you are as a person! Whatever you make think let it be known that you are unique! wonderful peice of work that you made, many images come to my head with every single line read :) ~Bella
can i read this at a poetry reading n dedicate it to u?
This was a really powerful and stirring write....brought a tear to my eye...fantastic....relatable -SG x
I hate it when people look at my eyes... even in pictures. I consider them the windows to my soul and would shatter them if they didn't keep the cold out. There is however a freedom in wearing a mask as clothes and colors are only a facade. I like your words... they make me think of these things...
You are honest to pull out all things from your chest...this is good poem that felt so deep as it really expressed your feeling, thought and pain..i feel it real..Write more silenttpoet Girl_Unwritten Soul
A really great poem, really felt the pain and emotion in this. A fantastic write.
That was beautifully written. Just how I feel at most times. Love it! ! !
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7/21/2025 4:10:29 AM # 1.0.0
I feel this one girl! well cept i've never worn makeup lol