Monday, July 17, 2006

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dreams shattered in the tense stillness
as endless threats and blows clothe my form
My stomach flutters in familiar fear
and I am ashamed of my weakness
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Angela Davis
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Alexia Sohr 12 August 2006

I can scarely see what it is I am typing, my eyes are flowing with my broken heart that any person is forced to endure such abuses. This is moving, so very powerful. I am certain it will change someone's life, victim or abuser.

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Stan Pelfrey 10 August 2006

Very nice, the last few lines are really speaking to me.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 17 July 2006

Yum! This is good to read! i can relate to the 'disconnected' yet emotionally connected 'investment'. Pain does not feed upon immaturity for too long! We grow to accept the flow of the various shades of feelings we carry until that day comes and we welcome all experiences we had that develops our understanding...first, of who we are! Second...we even manage to find ourselves loving stronger! With just one purpose: to forgive ourselves that we let someone else 'break' us apart before we gather those pieces to mend ourselves again! I hope it's obvious I like this poem...LOL L

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