Friday, September 13, 2013

Shattered Things Comments

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I come from a line of shattered things
and throw away paper planes that flew for a moment
from steadfast sadness acres over

it’s hard enough to grieve alone
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Amy Whittlesey
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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2013

Sombre thoughts so deftly woven to portray the shattered things of life! 'it’s hard enough to grieve alone harder still when you find the truth and then, freeze frame, you’re stuck' So wonderfully said, liked it!

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Gajanan Mishra 13 September 2013

good write, thanks, I like it.

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