Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Shattered Piece Now Returned Comments

Rating: 4.6

Whispering your words for times
Straight to me, to me
Convinced space in mine
Soften the surface to be carved
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2018

To prove the Lending a thought about trust and how much it cost you have created a brilliant poem here for readers.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

To where it was before! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

it is very hard to regain trust once it has been broken. Probably never be fully the same again.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Beautiful poem... I am left with no words...I can see all the lovely comments and agree with them..I loved reading your poem..deep and meaningful.

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Rekha Mandagere 22 July 2013

I think this soul is omnipresent. Happy to see him shinning here with his musical verse here. Nice poem.

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Hazel Durham 21 July 2013

The pain and heartache when someone close betrays your trust, it tears at your soul bound in complete trust of sincere feelings, that are wiped out with such force! ! Amazing indepth, emotional and vivid account! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb 19 July 2013

I wish I could write a long piece as you do. Regards.

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Patricia Grantham 17 July 2013

To trust someone is to put your whole confidence in them. When this trust is breached it then leaves a feeling of emptiness. Makes it harder the second time around. An inspiring write.

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Spiritual Seeker 12 July 2013

Trust....like a little girl falling into the hand of a loving father...in this case a mix of innocence and true love! ! Never broken....another nice write soul. Trusting 10.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 July 2013

trust is a transparent wall, can be broken at any time! ! ! ! ! ! A very good poem

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

great poem _Soul, its very hard to gain trust once you have betrayed someone, that is why we need to make sure not to let our close friends and family down because once they lose trust in you, wining it again is close to impossible. Siya_! !

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James Mclain 07 July 2013

Unfortunately or fortunately, trust we must at one time or another. At least this way we know we are normal...iip

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Dinesan Madathil 06 July 2013

Trust begets trust and you are penetrating into the concept rightly. A good write. YourDinesh

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

the shattered shards are hard to mend. sometimes never. good read

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Ramesh Rai 29 June 2013

written so deeply makes me to think what to comment

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Danny Draper 28 June 2013

Trust is a fragile thing with an unforgiving core once betrayed with a overpowering reluctance to forgive and very often fully understandably so. Great emotion in this piece.

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Erica Morgan~maples 28 June 2013

wow that's a good one i really liked reading that poem good job

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Paul Brookes 28 June 2013

Such sadness the names once inscribed upon the heart remain for a lifetime. Nice poem thanks for sharing BB =: OD

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2013

So nice soul. feel it's like breeze cool and soothing.

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2013

So nice soul. feel it's like breeze cool and soothing.

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