Tuesday, August 21, 2012

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Moon - a bashful bride
From behind the veil
Peers down into the silvery mirror.
Narcissus like,
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

Moon - a bashful bride From behind the veil Peers down into the silvery mirror.........beautiful beginning. This is a beautiful philosophical poem so nicely executed. Great write.

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 April 2016

Excellent poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 March 2015

A beautiful poem on the phases of life, or on the various phases of a woman that start like a crescent, climax of full moon, and then the anticlimax and ultimately a dark night.

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Thomas Hsi 15 September 2012

Thank you for such a beautiful poem. I feel there's much for me to learn.

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Danny Draper 31 August 2012

The power of a good poem and imagination to capture the ills of jealousy.

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Heather Wilson 25 August 2012

A wonderful poem -great imagination, such a joy to read,

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Valerie Dohren 24 August 2012

Great write, lovely imagery.

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Personification at its best use makes this poem very dear to read.. The Moon acquires a mysterious shade of relevance and entity of her own here.

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