Sunday, May 9, 2021

Shattered Houses Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you see these chain-blocked houses?
Where a thousand dreamers die
The silhouettes of souls now broke
Within these rotten bricks reside
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Kevin Patrick
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One of the social ills that must be given primordial attention. A brilliant write. Very discerning and incisive. Powerful poem. To my Poem List.

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I have witnessed this kind of place where a thousand dreamers die. Government agencies must create a scheme to alleviate the plight of these people.

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A vivid and honest depiction of the life of people in the poverty stricken city. So poignant yet so true.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 May 2021

A short but a powerful poem...Top marks

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 May 2021

you have gave me some hope in this world by this poem

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