Friday, October 17, 2008

Shattered Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart shattered by deceptive words
Tandem lies, misconceptions
A sharp tongue and a vague mind
Tear apart what was once sanity
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T.James Becker
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Viola Grey 18 October 2008

this short piece still packs a mighty punch....you have a great way of saying so very much with so few words....great work

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