Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Shattered Glass Comments

Rating: 3.5

Shattered mirror, broken glass
inside lay picture and our battered past
shiviers of glass cut deep like a knife
regrets bleed out the wounds of decisions we made in our life
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Nakesha Banks
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Enallor Koeh 17 October 2007

It was a good poem, some minor problems with flow but other than that very good. The message of the poem is a classic one and can come across as a cliche but you put it off very well!

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