Wednesday, January 19, 2005
Shattered Glass Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Thoughts creeping into my head,
Ones that I’d like to push away,
Yet they stay.
Eating into my heart,
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7/25/2025 12:49:37 PM # 1.0.0
You have good emotion in your poetry, and it feels like you are being honest with it. The only thing I would work on is the flow between words. Just think about how the words are leaking into eachother. Think about your words like a water fall, pouring out your heart in the form of flowing water, engulfing the rocks below and becoming a complete and dynamic whole.