Monday, August 3, 2009

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did I wake you?
Were you sleeping?
Were you still in my bed?
Or is a nightmare keeping you up instead?
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Ashley Nichol
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Wesley Mincin 04 August 2009

There are few women, I believe, that are worth anything in this world just like there are few men who deserve any sort of attention. It would seem like he lost something good and because he F-ked up, he wouldn't deserve a worthy woman anyway. The poem is a situation that you went through and reflects a common problem in the world: that people don't see what's in front of them and so they strive to get something that isn't half as good as what they already have. I knew a person who went through the same exact thing. Good poem, Ms. Nichol.10 for content.10 for meaning.

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