Monday, March 9, 2009

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shards of heart span the floor,
Scattered, carelessly lain
Splinters piercing from the door
They personalize my pain
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Timothy Weiermann
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Whitney Nicole Albright* 12 March 2009

I agree with Sally. You express yourself well. Write more.

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Joseph Poewhit 10 March 2009

Emotional upset, sets in motions juices flowing toward creativity. Great artist talk of it. You found inspiration, to express your sorrows. It's good to let the hurt out, it helps the inside.

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Anjali Sinha 10 March 2009

Awh sooooooo sweet and poignant my lil fren in deep pain again chuck her out of your system shes not worth your love I know what an angel you are you are young ---dont you worry the pond is full of lovely fish -10 anjali lots of love dear Timo love you lots your best fren

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i love this poem its beautiful you put your soul into it i know it great job

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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