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He used to be very silent
Dont even try to open his mouth
To let his thoughts and feelings to come out
He was always all alone with no one else
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This is well penned. Your poem was expressed well. When someone takes their own life, that is one of the worse mistakes they could possibly make. Good job on this poem, I give it a 10.
If only the world will value what life really is! Nice one you got there.
Soaked with the talents and sadness of a good poet. I love the stanza: 'Will he escape the shadows that eating his soul and flesh? ' that gave me chills. You feel how i feel constantly...sad. Thank you -Tyease
i loved this poem. It was amazin and u have the talent to achieve anything u want so dont give up hope and don't give up faith. I would like u to read some of my poems and tell me what u think about them either comment me or message me anyways. as i was saying u have the ability to achieve anything u just got to put ur mind to it okay. lots of love friend and best of wishes on ur journey of life.
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7/28/2025 4:05:42 AM # 1.0.0
it haunts me...so much inspirational.....10+