Sunday, July 5, 2009

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

He used to be very silent
Dont even try to open his mouth
To let his thoughts and feelings to come out
He was always all alone with no one else
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Lycko Chizo
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Vijay Sai R 25 July 2009

it haunts me...so much inspirational.....10+

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Tracey Wynn 25 July 2009

This is well penned. Your poem was expressed well. When someone takes their own life, that is one of the worse mistakes they could possibly make. Good job on this poem, I give it a 10.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 July 2009

If only the world will value what life really is! Nice one you got there.

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Tyease Collins 21 July 2009

Soaked with the talents and sadness of a good poet. I love the stanza: 'Will he escape the shadows that eating his soul and flesh? ' that gave me chills. You feel how i feel constantly...sad. Thank you -Tyease

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Marieta Maglas 15 July 2009

nice poem finely penned with nice ideas...10

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Krystal Vincent 05 July 2009

i loved this poem. It was amazin and u have the talent to achieve anything u want so dont give up hope and don't give up faith. I would like u to read some of my poems and tell me what u think about them either comment me or message me anyways. as i was saying u have the ability to achieve anything u just got to put ur mind to it okay. lots of love friend and best of wishes on ur journey of life.

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Lycko Chizo

Lycko Chizo

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