Glazed my eyes through lack of sleep
Coldness through my veins doth seep
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I take it back, you made me cry. Very powerfull and straight from the heart, who did this to you? I am here
This is a very powerful piece Sue. You pour so much emotion into every word. Andrew x
You can feel the emotions in this poem...... Very well written I could sense the sadness while i read this may things get better... Hugz! CC
Your feelings of sadness are felt in the words you have expressed in your write. May you once again find the peace and joy that you are seeking deep within your heart. Scott
Outstanding! I will continue to keep up with all of your poems. Shattered is a wonderfully powerful poem, you clearly are a skilled poet. Stone