Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

Glazed my eyes through lack of sleep

Coldness through my veins doth seep
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sue crocker
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Stone Granite 05 May 2008

Outstanding! I will continue to keep up with all of your poems. Shattered is a wonderfully powerful poem, you clearly are a skilled poet. Stone

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Mick Law 17 March 2008

I take it back, you made me cry. Very powerfull and straight from the heart, who did this to you? I am here

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Andrew Blakemore 08 March 2008

This is a very powerful piece Sue. You pour so much emotion into every word. Andrew x

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Coreena Dejesus 07 March 2008

You can feel the emotions in this poem...... Very well written I could sense the sadness while i read this may things get better... Hugz! CC

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Scott Austin 05 March 2008

Your feelings of sadness are felt in the words you have expressed in your write. May you once again find the peace and joy that you are seeking deep within your heart. Scott

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