Friday, March 4, 2005

Shattered Comments

Rating: 4.3

A crash destroyed my happy dream,
it must be glass that loudly shattered,
turns out a palm frond that I'd left,
just slightly yellow, and preparing
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 25 August 2005

Beautiful image, I enjoyed it!

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 05 March 2005

This one is just beautiful.Loved it.Thank you.

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Christine Magee 05 March 2005

Another memorable poem from you. A pleasure to read. Chrissie

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Rich Hanson 05 March 2005

I enjoyed this poem, Herbert. Sandra is right.

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Sandra Osborne 05 March 2005

Your a master in any form, long, short, they are all just great. I miss you my friends.

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Allan James Saywell 04 March 2005

Herbert i have given you a ten, all your poetry is worth the maximum mark you never deserve a one, when i read the title i thought of my peace being shattered by english guns, young guns english young guns but all is quiet on the western front Warm regards allan

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