Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

my dreams got shattered into million pieces,
like the mirrors in the great hall of Versailles, would!
reminiscent of the demaneaur of a heartless queen, whose cruelty crushed the innocent lives of millions!
I don't even know if I am able to dream again!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2019

A little bud, called love, blossomed very gently in my heart.....Again I am moving towards another little thing! I appreciate your poetic acumen and the way you pen! A beautiful poem....10

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Another little thing - yes, little things are beautiful and touch hearts the way perhaps a big thing can't! Appreciate your reading my poems, leaving inspiring comments, and rating! Your thoughtful comments are valuable in my journey!

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HB Rita 09 April 2019

A broken angel enduring thinking of her lost love. This poem is full of disappointment and pain. Well written. Keep up the good work. All the best.

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I really appreciate your reading the poem, and leaving thoughtful comments. Thank you.

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HB Rita 10 April 2019

I rated your poem 10. Enjoy

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Thank you for rating my poem. Appreciate!

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