Sharon's First Thoughts Comments

but it sliced her sleep open........i like the alliteration, but the image of having my sleep sliced (almost) makes me cringe; i don't cringe easily, luckily. some favorite lines: morning and delight - all coalesced into a happiness she inhabited que sera, sera. bri :)

How enjoyable reading this piece! 'she crossed herself twice, once out of fear, once out of joy', double awakening, such a delight morning! Most of my days begin with such a morning, awake in brids' music, dawn lights' caressing!

Never doubt this shower will cleanse my soul of lingering darkness, and dispel the stubborn heaviness of night. - I hope so. I want so.