Wednesday, June 13, 2018

Sharks In Blue Water Comments

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Swimming in blue water
Admiring the fish
Along comes a shark
And makes him his dish
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 July 2018

Wow did u actually meet a shark close by while swimming? My man swims the ocean but hasn't seen one. Your poem is awesome, such superb rhyming and flow wow. I really enjoyed it. Kudos! . So nice to read from u again, do Pleez add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too titled, mirage surprise

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Kostas Lagos 01 July 2018

I shouldn't read this poem during Summer.I will think it twice before I go for a swim! Geat work!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 June 2018

A fascinating poem. A vivid portrayal of the power of a shark. It conveys the distinguishing features of this King of the sea. Well penned.10

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