Friday, February 29, 2008

Sharing Wing Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

A moon
the colour of sorrow.

Rain falling
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 29 February 2008

What could I do but agree with JH and DDW...BRILLIANT! Evocative, startling word pictures, emotions that fill the air...and linger there...on the wing of the sharing birds...Beautifully Crafted.

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Dee Dee Wright 29 February 2008

Brillant...I second that emotion! I know that Chinese legend and I love the notion of it! But what you do with it and where you take it. The whole notion of the cat stepping through a memory engraved in the air is fantastic especially the last line of the memory of us...bristling his fur. Wonderful stuff. Your power to evoke startling images and tell a good story whilst making us laugh and then cry at the same time is beyond bounds. I just love what you can do with your words and where your words take me. I was drawn to the title because of knowing the legend but didn't expect anything as wonderful as this. superb writing! love Dee Dee

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Not a member No 4 29 February 2008

Brilliant....... .

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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