Sharing The Rhyme Comments

Suzan, a good one, I am in full agreement! I tried to do a similar thing in my latest poem - The Prisoner! - Raj Nandy

I enjoyed this but you do have a habit of putting at least one line in which may jar or startle, 'Doesn't see I'm bent' is the one in this case! I know what you mean, but this is a stark way of putting it. Maybe its your style. Overall I enjoyed the idea and execution of this poem. Patrick

Thank you for sharing your rhymes. Jolanta :)

Poetry does have a way of creating bonds among total strangers. Keep sharing... great write! ! Brian

Well written. Good poem. Marilyn