Thursday, June 12, 2008

Sharing Our Last Pistachios Comments

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We all need a place to call our own.
A space where we can be alone.
To let our thoughts be sorted out,
seeking what life is all about,
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Ernestine Northover
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Ernestine, this piece is a plethoric pour of true to life fact, and delivered(but of course) with an equal pour of poetic justice, a la Northover...I like when a writer is perceptively creative in honing in on a single, word, or phrase in their work, that does not necessarily define the work per se, yet has its own significant impact, enough so, to employ it as the Title....and that's just what you have done here....Excellent Work, young lass! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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David Harris 12 June 2008

Ernestine, you are so right we all need a place we call our own, that little corner where we can be alone. We also need friends at time to talk to from time to time. Beautiful poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. Hugs David

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Duncan Wyllie 12 June 2008

We all need a place to call our own. A niche that is our private zone. Where stressful troubles quickly cease, relaxing quietly, at peace, So true, so beautifully put Ernestine, glad you wrote this, it has all the hallmarks of a quailty piece Love duncan X

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