Monday, February 16, 2015

Sharing A Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you knock at my doors with aurora of a dawn,
I know you have come with the rosy showers,
When you knock my doors with aurora of dusk,
I know you have come with sweet white flowers,
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Bisma Mirza 20 February 2015

wow... beautiful poem....10 on 10

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Kee Thampi 18 February 2015

I know you have come with sweet white flowers, My sun rises with a message of love, My moon rises with a package of love. love in words........

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Valsa George 17 February 2015

I sleep with beauty and dreams of love, How beautiful are days how lovely are nights! What a beautiful life it is! Sleeping with beauty and dreaming of love with a heart loaded with love! Lovely!

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Valsa George 17 February 2015

I sleep with beauty and dreams of love, How beautiful are days how lovely are nights! What a beautiful life it is! Sleeping with beauty and dreaming of love with a heart loaded with love! Lovely!

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Khalida Bano Ali 16 February 2015

A beautiful poem......................10

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Tushar Ray 16 February 2015

Wonderful poetic description of love with a finish punch I don't hate anyone I am a glory of love, May I share with you this story of love? . Thank you for sharing Akhtar Jawad

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