~shared Loneliness~ Comments

sometimes silence is so painful...and yet sometimes life throws up a friend with who hours and hours of silence is natural...love...nalini

Loneliness is a pathetic situation.............? If somebody talks it gives a courage to step into this void? Mary anyhow you shared the loneliness with the reader.

Skilful and accurate depiction of together-but-not-togetherness. Bittersweet. Grand write.

Very nice write. I love the feeling of separation that is in this one, each one forging ahead along a different road. Love Ernestine XXX

The depth of lonliness, the feeling of being alone in a room with someone else present - skillful, well done, Mary....Keep the free verse going, it is marvelous.

So much said when not speaking, you have shown the reader how important it is to try and bridge gaps that have laid open for far too long, a skillful piece Love Duncan x

Brilliant, Mary! ! ! ! You are doing some of your best work in free verse! ! ! I am beyond impressed.