Thursday, September 15, 2022

Shared Charms Comments

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He wears, with me, the charms of love,
exchanging gentle whispers in storms
of fascinated, trembling union.
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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

Faites attention. : ) bri Peter, ....again?

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

'partage noun Division; partition; the act of dividing or sharing ' I had not seen YOUR definitions till near the end of poem. Ha. I think your choice of words is at times influenced by your use of French.

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

I only find 'reproof' as the noun form of 'reprove'; I don't find 'reproof' defined as a verb, as you seem to use it. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

'innocency ĭn′ə-sən-sē noun Innocence ' Does our dictionary really need a word 'innocency' when we already have 'innocence'? ? ? ? ? Am I to say to my lawyer now: 'Prove my innocency'?

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

titivate tĭt′ə-vāt″ transitive verb To make decorative additions to; spruce up. That must be a Princeton word. I'll add it to my LONGGG list of words unknown and never-used by me. bri : )

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anais vionet 16 September 2022

I'll try and answer all of your comments in one whack - this piece is in an ''ol English' style. Some of the words are in old English forms that aren't used much anymore - it just a 'thought piece.' Thanks for all of the comments Bri!

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