Shared Charms Poem by anais vionet

Shared Charms



He wears, with me, the charms of love,
exchanging gentle whispers in storms
of fascinated, trembling union.

He shares with me blue velvet nights
of careful and unmeasurable bliss,
and titivates modest morning rebirths.

He cares for me, reproof us not, we make
no show of virtue, or counterfeit innocency,
but partage, in comfort, this open honesty.

titivate: make more attractive, improve
innocency = a show of innocence
partage = share

Thursday, September 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: teen,romance,night,morning,university
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

Faites attention. : ) bri Peter, ....again?

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

'partage noun Division; partition; the act of dividing or sharing ' I had not seen YOUR definitions till near the end of poem. Ha. I think your choice of words is at times influenced by your use of French.

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

I only find 'reproof' as the noun form of 'reprove'; I don't find 'reproof' defined as a verb, as you seem to use it. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

'innocency ĭn′ə-sən-sē noun Innocence ' Does our dictionary really need a word 'innocency' when we already have 'innocence'? ? ? ? ? Am I to say to my lawyer now: 'Prove my innocency'?

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

titivate tĭt′ə-vāt″ transitive verb To make decorative additions to; spruce up. That must be a Princeton word. I'll add it to my LONGGG list of words unknown and never-used by me. bri : )

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anais vionet 16 September 2022

I'll try and answer all of your comments in one whack - this piece is in an ''ol English' style. Some of the words are in old English forms that aren't used much anymore - it just a 'thought piece.' Thanks for all of the comments Bri!

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