Monday, May 2, 2016

Share Thy Feelings Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sing that song
That heals thy heart
When you have lost everything
Yet there is always a new start
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Lyn Paul
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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

Lyn, This is a five-star poem for sure! ! Sometimes medications, such as anitdepressants, may help someone in need. You've done a FINE JOB, Lyn. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'If you are so low You need to tell an ear that will care' MORE GOOD ADVICE. Hopefully such ears are available when needed, and they may be on telephone 'Help Line'. : ) I think such 'lines'are toll free. : )

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) Ok, 'bare' as a verb here means: 'to make or lay (something) bare (see BARE entry 1) : UNCOVER' ....ok! : )

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'Share your pain Bare your load' IS GOOD advice! ! But I 'had to' check the meaning of 'bare' to be sure that I understood. (cont.)

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Jennifer Birchall 10 March 2019

This is a poem I needed to read right now, thank you for this wonderful poem Lyn.

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2017

very inspirational. and it is gentler than just screaming: get off that couch and go outside, take a walk, do something with your life, you LAZY BUM! ! you, Lyn, have the woman's touch. to MyPoemList. bri :)))))) and thanks for some good rhyming........though i'm not sure i noticed it the first time i read the poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2017

Let each ache Bring you closer to living Do not give up Find your gift of giving... you really gave me hope.. after a heart attack i was losing hope. it is then i read ur poem.. thank u. God comes through the poetess... tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

With the Hope of living! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 14 May 2016

The blessing thing in you is the soft and caring heart...and the poem speaks for you telling how good you are :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2016

Sing the songs of peace and love and, share your pains in life! Hoping for a better tomorrow. Nice piece of work.

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Tony Karas 03 May 2016

A magical write my friend. Hope is a phoenix... it always rises from the ashes.

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