Monday, January 15, 2007

Shapeshifter Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the blue sky is masked
by joyless swells of grey,
and my breath is captured
in buoyant, white puffs,
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Tara Teeling
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Francesca Johnson 15 January 2007

I found this poem interesting, for two reasons. It describes so well the angst and trauma of growing up through those pre-teen years and upwards, and I delighted in your descriptive prowess. Altogether a delight to read such a well-written poem. Top marks, Tara. Love, Fran xx

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