Shanty Comments

Hi, very beautiful poem.

she haves you! which is also better to be shanty! lol! thanks for sharing dear! I love it!

A very sweet thought like a jewel in its case :) Very well done! 10

You put such a lot of wisdom into so few words, beautiful piece Nightingale, 10 Lynda xx

Wonderful thought...well expressed. Something like small and very very sweet poem. sathya narayana

sometimes it ony takes a few words...beautiful work.

a sweet poem. i hope you'll get what you wish for.

Ahh A lovely short and sweet poem Shiraz! You have her in the shanty of your mind But in her world (you) are not there, to find Tell her about the feelings you've got Then you'll win her love - the love you have sought! A pleasure to read. *10*! !

Very beautifully....