Shangrila Comments
Shape like a heart in love of someone,
Having a name like the heroine of a love story,
All round I see the resorts for love,
Nude of the nature with a hidden glory.
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It reads even better the second time. You have put your heart in to this heart shaped lake in such a wonderful way that it almost seems as you are in love with the lake. Well done my friend!
Lovely lines that are loaded with love for nature in general and the lake in particular. Jawad you have brought this lake to life in such a simple but splendid way. Excellent expressed my friend. Congrats for your poem being chosen as the poem of the day. Well deserved.10+++
Fascinating poem and wonderful picture.. a ten..
A lovely nature write. It beautifully and vividly depicted a one of a kind lake. Another marvelous poem from a great poet. Congratulations!
What a wonderful piece of poetry with a fascinating picture, Akhtar Sahab! I loved the way you have weaved in the heart into Shangrila lake. The curved auricles raining into the ventricles. Wow! Heartiest Congratulation with a huge 10
Beautiful poem. Nature has its own beauty, so is your poem singing, uplifting with wonderful imagination. Loved reading it. Congratulations! ! !
The lake / Shangrila lake is wonderfully penned here in your poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
I have already read this poem earlier. Thank you very much for creating such a poetic gem. This is the time to congratulate you. A deserving poem is selected as the member poem of the day.
nicely depicted the fantasy of aqua green lake.... Congrats for the poem being selected as the POD. With best wishes.
Such beautiful emotions arising from beautiful lake view. Congratulation.
Congratulations on the POD! So beautiful to write about something so tangible as the Shangrila lake! It brings forth the beautiful emotions worded in this lovely poem! I would like to plunge into it's beauty!
A lovely poem, dear Akhtar. Congrats for being selected as poem of the day.
Nude of the nature with a hidden glory .... Likeclouds I shall rain at your ventricles Absolutely fine artwork....10 Congrats my friend, for chosen at the POD
Rare are the charms of your curved auricles, I arose from the shores of the Arabian Sea Like clouds I shall rain at your ventricles, A pearl for you, no excuses, just accept my plea. - - - A marvelous poem with beautiful poetic expression.
Gorgeous beauty of a fairy I see. beautiful my dear Akhtar, simply beautiful...... thank u dear Akhtar. tony
Such an amazing poem of the day, Akhtar... Congrats for being chosen...10+++
wow marvelous poetic expression of beautiful nature Gorgeous beauty of a fairy I see O great I find in every your poetry...........
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7/28/2025 3:59:44 PM # 1.0.0
A lovely place with a charming heart-shaped lake truly deserves a romantic bond or affinity for a lifetime. Great landscape of nature. Thanks for sharing the poem, Akhtar Jawad sahab.