Shampoo In My Eyes...... [cleanliness; Who's At The Door? ; Humor; Short] Comments

Wait for a messenger. A long time.

this poem is beautiful and interesting; I enjoyed reading it; it is like a short story.

Haha! Oh jeez......I think I'm actually speechless....

.........if this poem was a movie....it would be a blockbuster....and truly, worthy of an Oscar....loved reading every line in this entertaining piece....

In her embarrassment, did she take to heels forgetting to hand over the parcel? ? Imagine the fun of you then chasing her! !

I personally think you were a postman for too long my friend! Ha! Your version is cute but my version is definitely sexier. Maybe that is because I lift weights? : -)

there was a serious typo in the last stanza when first submitted; hopefully that is ok by the time you read this. :)