Friday, August 30, 2013

Shame Of Impotency Comments

Rating: 4.5

I bought a young angel with all my gold
A Cleopatra of the bold brothels' fold
Priding in her royal flesh trade profession
Transparent as to who she is in confession
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Raken Marimuthu
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Somanathan Iyer 08 September 2013

To make his work appear natural and to bring originality, a poet can imagine himself in the main role of his work. You have excelled in this. A bold attempt. Kudos,

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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

This is a unique poem where the poet has made a confession the kind of which is rarely seen. The honesty is appreciable. The question is, when the impotency is known, why to go for flesh trading? The note is true.

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Biljana Popovic 30 August 2013

Unusual and bitter, great confession!

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