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modern life summarized...this two liner shows the commanding hand...economy n compression...you know how to use all your weapons...

Short and sweet, enjoyed reading it, 10 Lynda xx

sweet and cute...thanks...10

so complete a description that further dwelling will just mar it

not the shortest pom beautifully done..10++++

Where did that come from? What inpired it? The reader is left wondering.

what a poem terse and deep in meaning

This is insanely amazing!

power from the 2-lined masterpiece..hope it ends with joy..grace

Nice couplet written. A change oh heart perhaps! ! !

what's this abrupt change all about?

What caused that change....? may be the time tainted its innocent infancy!

You just concentrate on the first part and retain it, the other part would automatically be subdued. Like the thought! :) 10+++

Excellent composition,10+++

Good idea tersely expressed

lovely idea.. well penned.