Friday, January 4, 2008

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I thought I saw you today…

It was a glimpse of a coat tail
and a brown leather shoe…
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YURI DURAAN
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 05 March 2008

Call yourself a poet Yuri... you deserve it My Best C. J. Krieger

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This is very touching...keen observation of someone clearly loved who left a profound mark. I think your reader will know exactly what you mean... a fleeting glimpse of an attribute of a loved one on someone else brings intensity, and disappointment, and a sense of loss, and reminiscence. t x

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

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