Shallow Beauty Comments

Good poem. You might enjoy my poem: I Say There Is No Physical Beauty.

I like this poem... It happens so often... first you have shysical attraction... but when you get past it... you have to have something more... GREAT! ! !

I like this one very much. The flow of the ideas and words go well. And of course, there's the wit. I would say, YES!

wow...this is just cool

a voice as smooth as slate......what a line love the title, explains all pp x

I like this one... Drawn in on physical attraction and then later disapointed. I'ts good =)

This really works. We're all drawn in by asthetics, and try in vain to find something deeper behind the facade. Great poem. Hugs Anna xxx

Well done, and somewhat remeniscent of Shakespeare's 130th sonnet.

Breathtaking, Jon. I really like this poem. Its the first I've read of your other poems. Count on me reading more.

strangely evocative, I like it. Well done, Jerry