Friday, February 5, 2010

Shall We Sing? ! Comments

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Shall we sing a lovely song
A song of tender heart, it won't take long
A song of beautiful days that touched me
A dong of friendship that is really strong
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Reem Ehab 02 March 2010

I was Surprised when I saw my name overthere! ! ... Really thanks Zeinab... you are a talented and loyal friend as well. I can't find words to say how much I'm happy with this poem and how much I'm grateful to you. Thanks again Zeinab. I really appreciate it. I hope you do better and better...and I'm waiting for more :)

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Merna Ibrahim 16 February 2010

Oh! This is a great dedication zeinab and a marvelous poem as well! It is a pleasure for me to find my name there :) ! What a lovely song and a lovely friend as you :) Thank you so much and I am sorry that I didn't notice the poem and read the other poems! I am really grateful for you my friend :)

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Omar Ibrahim 15 February 2010

a poem is the best dedication to someone.no doubt they will be happy if they read this beautiful poem.but there is a little thing.: The tree that gathered us by chance It promised us that even if we were in (france) i was told that trying to base the meaning on the rhyme makes the meaning very weak...france is very near now.just 3 hours by plane and you will be in france :) i'm not kidding.a poet told me that one day....you can write whatever you want then try to find words that can rhyme with the above word.and if you want to say that it will gather you even if you were very far, (france is not a god choice because of what i said :) i made something very near to what you did and a poet told me something like that. i liked the poem overall..you new poems are better than your old poems.that's great thanks for sharing

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 February 2010

and let us sing........ nice write!

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