Shall we dance among the moonbeams,
hold each other safe and tight.
Play hide and seek in the shadows
by the magic of faint starlight.
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Sterling imagework, and crisp, tight structure highlight this fine piece of work...Smooth fluxionthroughout....like the lone line close-out... ~F. j. R. ~
Absolutely beautiful, dancing among the moon beams... lovely
I've just read through all your poetry, Ms C ;) You have a lovely talent indeed. This one, I think, was my favourite. I love the playful rhythm and the optomistic theme of love and romance. Here's sending you some hugz! L