The music played softly
The dim light created an ambiance
In the cool, breezy night of December
Balls and balloons
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...a piece that bring joy to my heart while reading...it brings a unique feeling....very beautifully written..the thoughts are brilliantly laid....words are romantically put together... the beautifully painted picture of the romantic dance...and the beautiful unexpected ending....it's just a dream my friend? leave me the feeling of hoping that beautiful dream...to be real....10+++++++for this.....
What a lovely dream! Exquisite.Meggie. Ten for you, Love, SandraX
The waking and the dreaming love coalesce very beautifully in this passionate romantic poem. You use some very attractive images too, Meggie that are special: 'The bright moonlight in its full size', and 'Oh, I am not blinded by my imagination Not even the falling stars Tomorrow then..yes..we shall dance....again' Hope seems to spring eternal in this lyrical piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
MEGGIE, THIS IS BEAUTIFULL. VERY POWERFUL DELIVERY IN EVERY SENSE. WE SHOULD ALL DANCE, YES? MUSIC, MOVEMENT, AND, IF WE'RE IN THE RIGHT SPOT AT THE RIGHT TIME, ROMANCE. A SUPER WAY TO SHARE AND EXPLORE. MEMORIES ARE MADE OF THIS...MY BEST, CAROL
An enchanting poem Meggie, beautifully expressed and a delight to read! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad
a lovely maneuver...I can imagine the tip toe simultaneously..well penned..10 Ency Bearis
What a lovely scene you have painted for us Meggie, well written, 10 Lynda xx
Well are you asking well, I'm dancing.. Beautiful sweetie... Andy 10
Hi Meggie, I've been meaning to get to this one for some time now... but better late than never! Excellent write. Hope you are keeping well; warm wishes, Eddie.