Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Shall We? Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is again one of the days, when the soul is restless and the rhythm is uneasy
The pattern of thoughts pile one upon another and the mind relives the dream of last night
I waited for long at the gate of that last train and then touched you for one last time
You did not stop me when I tried to move on,
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Richa Tiwari Joshi
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Himanshu Joshi 01 February 2008

Good Words! Excellent Poem! you should keep writing good words!

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Geetanjali Tuli 29 January 2008

You have a gift of putting down your thougths very beautifully. And you manage to say alot about the way other feel too. Its really nice to know that someone out there shares the same thoughts. Use the diary to the maximum....

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V F 22 January 2008

Oh this is so touchingly beautiful! .... beautiful! !

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