Friday, August 2, 2013

Shall Never See Her Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Simple, sweet and fair,
And is ignorant
to the meaning of love and care.
Cheerful and is dispelling gloom
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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

such a lovely poem yet with a sad ending. a good write

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Yasmin Khan 03 September 2013

The scene captured by the eye of imagination is enchanting and memorable.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 August 2013

A difrent poem frm u so superb im rhyme scheme! Kudos! Bittersweet picturing of a lady. Do chk out my horsey poem.

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

She's like a morning dew And more entrancing than rainbow`s hue.. Now shrink my heart and seize my soul.... what a masterpiece u have written, brilliant Gulsher, its amazing

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2013

Gulsher, i thought of you a couple of times recently and wondered how you are. well, i hope! i like this poem for the flow and rhyme of it. it is more enjoyable when i don't stop to try to wrestle with a few parts which i was unsure of (the meaning) . And entrancing than rainbow`s hue.....i would suggest more in front of entrancing, if that is what is meant. Lost and restraint......i would change restraint to restrained. thanks for sharing my friend. bri :)

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Hira Akhtar 07 August 2013

Shall never see her again....Wow a beautiful love poem about pain and strain described in extraordinary wording.The figurative language is superbly used.I loved it :) Keep on

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Payal Parande 06 August 2013

Be of love a little more careful than of anything. such a beautiful pieces sir

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Unwritten Soul 03 August 2013

Never see again...the end rebuke a poetic letter about the real meaning of lost and restrain...dark and warm met in this poem, just like chocolate bar, bittersweet taste, and it's yummy_Soul

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