Simple, sweet and fair,
And is ignorant
to the meaning of love and care.
Cheerful and is dispelling gloom
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The scene captured by the eye of imagination is enchanting and memorable.
A difrent poem frm u so superb im rhyme scheme! Kudos! Bittersweet picturing of a lady. Do chk out my horsey poem.
She's like a morning dew And more entrancing than rainbow`s hue.. Now shrink my heart and seize my soul.... what a masterpiece u have written, brilliant Gulsher, its amazing
Gulsher, i thought of you a couple of times recently and wondered how you are. well, i hope! i like this poem for the flow and rhyme of it. it is more enjoyable when i don't stop to try to wrestle with a few parts which i was unsure of (the meaning) . And entrancing than rainbow`s hue.....i would suggest more in front of entrancing, if that is what is meant. Lost and restraint......i would change restraint to restrained. thanks for sharing my friend. bri :)
Shall never see her again....Wow a beautiful love poem about pain and strain described in extraordinary wording.The figurative language is superbly used.I loved it :) Keep on
Be of love a little more careful than of anything. such a beautiful pieces sir
Never see again...the end rebuke a poetic letter about the real meaning of lost and restrain...dark and warm met in this poem, just like chocolate bar, bittersweet taste, and it's yummy_Soul
such a lovely poem yet with a sad ending. a good write