Thursday, July 31, 2008

Shall I Then Wait For You To Grow Up? Comments

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Shall I tell you the truth
the dark hidden secrets of the heart
Shall now unburden the undigested pieces of thought
masticated bits of unforgettable unachievable dreams?
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sreelekha premjit
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Empress Ina Spirit Mavuso 16 October 2008

This just me think of the growth of my babies. Looking at them I feel I should be with them everywhere they to protect them. a lovely piece. still pouring out love. Blessed

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Chitra - 07 August 2008

impressive write and novel expressions there

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Kesav Easwaran 01 August 2008

the agony is well brought out...waiting has an ultimate ending...the phrase 'siamese twins...' is much impressive 10/10

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