Shall I Speak? Comments

Of my most revered desire Ready to impede every other entity To fill your hushed living space With the sensuous rumble of my endless ardour! .....ya you must speak fearlessly and express strong desire to beloved ones.... lovely poem composed with earnest desssssire and honesty...i loved it....10 read mine anywhere.. butterflies around...... mary to marry...strong desire

I barge into your private silence rightfully With an impromptu oration Of my most revered desire Ready to impede every other entity To fill your hushed living space With the sensuous rumble of my endless ardour! these lines are simply great depiction of your understanding of love, desire and possession... keep up the good work...grtaeful if your could go thru some of my poems esp CAN I BE A POET TOO? and CAN I? , shall be grateful for your comments

Nice poem. I love the second stanza most.

thanx for being inspired :) spoken very intensely, thanx again.

a nice poem on love and desire wrote in vibrant lines using simple but attractive words and lines. this para is heavy with its contents 'Torrent of my surging desire, Ready to flood every space of your fear Yet keeping you consciously afloat On the rising waves of an amorous tide! ' love this poem voted10 surya