Shall I Rise? Comments

I have the choice! ! ! With the voice of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A brilliant poem well written embellished with superb imagery and beautiful and strong verses putting the reader into the shoes of the author, feel what she feels and be with her thoughts. Another write that stirs the senses

Sometimes when we are enveloped by sadness and we are at our lowest lows, we usually ask this powerful question, Shall I Rise? " A powerful, wonderful and thought provoking poem that presents the intriguing nature of human beings. That we are endowed with capabilities to assess the situation and put into action whatever our mind set us to do.

darkness thunders loud and the waves come crashing down on the fallen too hard Shall I rise to catch my falling self in mid-air......outstanding conceptualization with deeep melancholy. Brilliant poem with touching expression is incisively executed. A10.

10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and omto my fav list

Stunning. Absolutely stunning. Nosheen has a remarkable pen that creates atmosphere and imagery that will stay with the reader for a long long time

Simply wonderful, from the pen of a great poetess.

This poem holds such beauty in its verses!

Part 2 I often go through such a melancholy mood. So I think I am able to empathise with the poet easily. Poetry is, normally, my sole solace in these situations. I believe it is the same for you too. A 100 for this wonderful write, though that, nor my words is adequate to express my feelings.

Nosheen is at her best in her poems of gloom and sadness. This one captures the expressions of a pensive heart, with fierce intensity. A heart affected by the profound darkness that ... “thickens Into an impenetrable silence”. Shelley wrote, “my heart aches....” Contd.....

Shall I rise from the night where darkness thunders loud and the waves come crashing down........./// beautiful poetic expression

A profound melancholy poem, dear Ma'am Nosheen..........10+++++++++++

Into my favorites.// Pronto!

Such a wonderful poem, dear Nosheen.