Shall I, No More, Contentment Praise Comments

Knowing now why this lovely poem was written, it touches my heart. Keep faith, talk to him - the ones we love stay close to us until God reunites us in the world of the spirit.

I hope you shall my friend.

Val, time moves you to be a very strong one, like a grass, a storm cant breaks you..you will stand till sun return_Soul

This is such a moving write Describing a world once so bright Now sadly left inert It tugs hard at my heart! ! Poems are the best source of consolation.. Val! !

My goodness, you, as I've often said, are such a gifted poet. These words are beautiful, deep and simply incredible. Pure poetry indeed.

This poem strikes a chord and is so truthful on many levels and must have been hard to write. A baring of the soul and very powerful. I was very moved by this poem 10/10 BB : O {

Ok, now this truthfully, made the tears fill my eyes, and such a moving, heartfelt poem it is. I've lost many, and the pain that is felt is so heartwretching, esp. when it is your one true love and soulmate. I am so sorry, but I am happy you are still writing poems. It seems to help release some of the pain, I find. And time....will help soften the heartache. Many {{{hugs}}} my friend

...in the transparent void you fill in the power of will to go ahead still farther and farther and soon the pathway will come to an end and there the element of sorrow too will die... we are journeying thus for a time span..

an excellent and v touching poem Mam..........the heart has created a vacuum but still its heavy as its burdened with thoughts and past memories.......worries becomes light when it comes out in the form of a poetic delight..........

Sadness envelops the emptiness. There also remain many sweet memories to be squeezed from cells of the honeycomb that is the past. Beautiful poem that moves the heart. Thank you.

A very sad poem, one day at a time, one of those days could bring a brighter dawn.