Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Shall I Die? Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night rain pouring pearls
Over our green pasures
Like you shower your kiss
Over my pearly cheeks
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Gordon Tseng 11 January 2012

The night rain pouring pearls Like you shower your words Over my pearly eyes Shall I dive in your work this night Leaving all others off my sight! ! !

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Gordon Tseng 11 January 2012

The night rain pouring pearls Like you shower your words Over my pearly eyes Shall I dive in your work this night Leaving all others off the sight! ! !

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Dave Walker 10 January 2012

Short and sweet, like it. A great poem.

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