Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Shall I Compare Akhtar To A Ball Of String? ... [a Tribute To My Ph Friend, Akhtar Jawad; Short] Comments

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If I compare Akhtar to a mere ball of string....,
what fine visions would it, to me, then bring?
A well-rounded fellow to be sure...; it's true!
He's one who gives and gives to me and you...,
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Valsa George 19 October 2015

Yes, Akhtarji is a string coiled round and if straightened will touch the moon, as Loke has observed! Bri is teacher to him...... so is to me!

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Darlene Walsh 18 October 2015

A wonderful tribute to Akhtar, I also enjoy his poems :)

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Awesome tribute to Janab. Akhtar...........Loved it.....nicely penned.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2015

Bri Edwards is my teacher. I have learnt a lot from him. English is not my language, he always pointed out my errors of English and i always welcomed his suggestions. So many times I edited and corrected my lines as suggested by this great teacher. I shall ever remain grateful to Bri Edwards. Thanks, Dear Teacher, a gratitude from a Teacher, for a student, is beauty, and a thing of beauty is a joy for ever.

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Loke Kok Yee 15 October 2015

He looks like a slim distinguished gentleman, his 'string' if joined will reach the moon and back. Thank you sir.

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Kelly Kurt 14 October 2015

Akhtar has a gift for writing with sensuality, expression and cleverly chosen words

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