Shall I? Comments

Beautifully articulated ma'am. After reading your poem, I just conjured up a few lines & uploaded them: -) Betrayed Oh! Sadness when shall thou return? Till then in loneliness shall I freeze or burn? I thought – dear sorrow, you were all mine Betrayed, I shan’t for you ever pine.

A beautiful poem in remembrance of lost love. I liked the following lines in particular: Should I strain my eyes? over the worn stony path, And pretend you are striding along Towards me, Memories frequently haunt but seldom taunt.