Monday, May 21, 2018

Shakhs-E-Insaan. Comments

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Dil thehar gaya, un aankho ko dekh kar
Nazam -o-mausiqi jaisa aalam hogaya
yun toh umeed rakhna aashiqun ki tareef hai
magar dunya mai pagal bhi toh rehtay hai
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Takbeer Salati 02 June 2018

Shukriya. Aagay khayal hoga :

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Rajnish Manga 21 May 2018

Apki is khubsurat nazm ke liye shukriya. Lekin kuchh jagah dhyan dene ki zarurat hai. Title 'Shakhs-E-Insaan' theek nahin lagta. Ise durust kar lena chahiye. (misaal ke liye diwan-e-ghalib yaani ghalib ka diwan) . Mujhse galti huyi ho to main muafi ka talabgar hun. (tavaja = tawaqqo / alfazon = alfaz. ek lafz hai aur ek se jyada alfaz hai)

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